When Dreams Come True

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The countdown to the new year had begun. He searched for her frantically, even as his stomach churned. At last, when he felt bold enough to give words to his feelings she was nowhere to be seen. It took him until the eighth count to find her.

The world had now stopped existing around him. Time stilled, and the music was barely more than background noise. Instead, he heard his heart thumping loudly. Seconds turned to hours as slowly, one pair of eyes looked up as the other peered down. Lips previously smiling in mirth turned solemn as they touched. Hands sneaked up to curve around the neck and waist. In the darkness of the party, tongues dared do things they would never have otherwise.

But that night, his heart also broke, because his dream came true, just not to him.

 

 


 

This scene was inspired by reading Strange The Dreamer by Laini Taylor. She mentions in passing about a God who punishes by making one’s wishes and dreams come true, but not for that person. I shall be posting a more in-depth review of the book soon, but needless to say, I was absolutely in love from the first moment I set eyes on it. I especially loved the writing style and would be very happy if I could, one day, write half as good as her.

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One thought on “When Dreams Come True

  1. Interesting how you take inspiration from something like that and create a very beautiful-cum-heartbreaking piece. It’s crazy how it affects me.

    The ending really breaks my heart. Though I love how you peak your readers interest and crush their hope towards the end. It’s like the game of thrones haha 🙂

    Really gravitated towards this. Would love to know when the in-depth analysis of the book will be posted 🙂

    Like

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